Is my love poem in Tagalog and Cebuano correct?

I attempted to create two stanzas of a love poem.

1st stanza in Tagalog::
Ang talino mo,
Ang ganda ng mga mata mo.
Gusto kitang makita,
Kailan tayo magkikita?
Ikaw ang pangarap,
Ninais kong mapalapit sa ‘yo,
Puso mo’y nasaan?

2nd stanza in Cebuano:
Pwede ka muuban nako?
Gusto ka makigsayaw uban nako?
Ayaw ko biya-e,
Gihigugma ko ikaw.
Kasabot naka nako karon?

I would like to ask 4 questions:
1. Is the 1st stanza grammatically correct/does it make sense?
2. Does reading the 1st stanza...

Is my love poem in Tagalog and Cebuano correct?